Better storytelling
The pitch
by Victor Hezemans & Nicole Bellios
What to avoid
- people not listening
- falling asleep
Take 2 minutes about a story to tell
- take a story you gonna work on, something exiting you did
Started running to remove fat, then I did a marathon … and I wanna do more, it changed my way of thinking and working
Target of this presentation
- Product Owner
- Scrum masters
- Dev team
- internal/external stakeholders
How to make sure people remember message
ideally 3 equals parts:
- education: 33%
- entertainment: 33%
- empowerment: 33%
but it doesn’t work
The brain is against it:
- the part that knows all the fact (outerpart)
- the part that take decision is the inner part
For iPhone you know that they are using slavery to build their phone and you still buy them
Story
Hiking in austria with her college friend wendy
situation, persona, climate, clothes … environment…
then
speak about the goal
describe the situation, what was going on
Then add the situation change and explain how it changes, speak about feeling and decision taking
New situation, new feelings
Then add a situation change
Go to the conclusion and a little moral
Take it as a metaphore
The mountain is a metaphore, be prepared well!
Let’s go back to the presentation / and how to prepare well
Use a canvas:
But first: “the stage is yours”
Ask someone to stand up and chare a story
as a story teller
The 9 hollywood steps
get the audience listening and walk in your shoes
- set the scene
- characters
- journey
the encounter
- obstacle
- overcome the obstacle
- resolve the story
resolving the story
I went through my story… and now what?
- make the point
- ask the question
- repeat the point
Ask the audience to go back to a time, location where your point did apply
Have you ever been there? Did that? Did it make you remember something?
Work in group
10’ working
Tell your story in group of 3-4 people for 10’
Check which of the 9 steps where taken into account and how?
Who has a good story?
Ask if someone wants to go on stage Repeating is a good way to do it
Go to the 9 points one by one
- help to find more points
borrow emotion from the story to make the point
Tips
- Time line and intensity line
- Move forward to make it more intensive
- Move backward to make it less intensive
- Move left to speak about the past
- Move right to speak about the future
- Use phantom object
- The backpack
- The bycicle
- Make the object real
- Change the tone of voice
- Persona voice
Join toast master to practice
How do you start: 4 connect method
- Stimuli: Something to make them look at you, get them off they current position, thought
- Advantage: Explain why they will have an advantage listening to you
- Expertise: Why you instead of google or someone else
- Story: go to your story
Ex:
- 3-4 slide with well prepared stimuli (picture)
- Benefits slides
- Show your expertise slides
- Story
Work in group
Find the 4 connects with the previous story 5’
Canvas
The canvas
Mother & son